Review Detail of RenuKakkar in Imaginary Friend

I found the story interesting and read all the chapters that have been posted so far. The story is different. It is unique. I felt that the author wanted to write as the main female character. This was at the beginning, but after the 17th chapter, I think there is a tendency to switch to the main male character. Understandable of course as the main female character has receded into a shell. If you are the narrator remain the narrator. If you are writing in first person and participating as a character do so till the end. No harm in that. World background is well described, that is the real world and the imaginary world. Character design is also good. The story is developing nicely. Stability of updates is progressing. Writing quality is good, but needs more improvement in sentence construction etc. I would suggest running your text through a grammar checker. We all make mistakes and I am no exception. I am waiting for updates :) All the best author.