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Yolo_Natss
Yolo_NatssLv123yrYolo_Natss

Bad writing quality, the sentences are upside down. Very childish narrative quality. I was distracted by it. World background alsmot a copy paste with VS Big WTF for character, mc is very unlikable. Like I don’t understand, he is very inconsistent personality wise. No negative emotion doesnt mean pure stupidity. Very childish way to caracterise mc psychopatic nature, there is two mode intense but like very intense murderer mode or seem to be super chill making friend with good poeple mode. Mc has the balls to judge somebody and befriending good guys. His way of thinking and his rationality is very limited. Story wise, well lets just say thats not my way of imagining a demon. I respect that but its written is a way that is personally very disturbing and unlikable Author ? Is everything good with you buddy ? Do you need someone to talk to ? Have you some past terrible trauma ? There i a lot of poeple who can help you know.

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The Great Demon System

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Drip
DripAuthorDrip

Why do you assume something is wrong with me? I was just writing stuff for the sake of writing stuff at the start, I didn't take the story seriously until later since j started this novel at a whim as kind of a joke before it actually got somewhat popular.

Rex_Jace
Rex_JaceLv15Rex_Jace

it's his style ive read this novel since the beginning. From all the books I've read hes only giving vivid details of his story if u don't like dont read.🤷‍♂️

Yolo_Natss
Yolo_NatssLv12Yolo_Natss

Yes I don’t like it so I stopped reading it. But first I have to read it to make my own judgement too.

Rex_Jace:it's his style ive read this novel since the beginning. From all the books I've read hes only giving vivid details of his story if u don't like dont read.🤷‍♂️
AimanFaroqq
AimanFaroqqLv15AimanFaroqq

Something indeed is wrong with you

Drip:Why do you assume something is wrong with me? I was just writing stuff for the sake of writing stuff at the start, I didn't take the story seriously until later since j started this novel at a whim as kind of a joke before it actually got somewhat popular.