Review Detail of Hit1903 in The Great Demon System
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This is really bad story. Your Mc is trash. I mean who laughs after torturing someone. I could understand satisfaction but laughing is so cringy. And when I read that he let the girl die just to hide his ability, I gave up. I mean she was the first girl who showed some sympathy without even knowing his real powers. She is way above the first 2 girls of his group and he let her die. Again thi is is shit.
The Great Demon System
Drip
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I mean, there was really no possible way that he could save her and he did not treat her badly. As for laughing, you said getting satisfaction is okay but laughing is not? Don't people laugh when they are happy or satisfied? I am just having a hard time understanding your point, thank you for your honest opinion none the less. đ
Just imagine, you are standing beside disfigured body who you are torturing. And then you laugh. That isn't laugh of satisfaction. That is the laugh of insanity
Drip:I mean, there was really no possible way that he could save her and he did not treat her badly. As for laughing, you said getting satisfaction is okay but laughing is not? Don't people laugh when they are happy or satisfied? I am just having a hard time understanding your point, thank you for your honest opinion none the less. đ
Hit1903:Just imagine, you are standing beside disfigured body who you are torturing. And then you laugh. That isn't laugh of satisfaction. That is the laugh of insanity
I am pretty sure mc could save her since that was already mentioned he just wanted to hide his power and Im also pretty sure she only died so mc can get the quest what more annoying is that he saves the yandere same way he could save her and what happened to the emergency button things the school provided couldn't they use those?
They don't want to use them in case it's a test where if they press it they fail. Plus, even if they pressed it, the retrieval team would have never made it in time.
Roy_Mascarenhas:I am pretty sure mc could save her since that was already mentioned he just wanted to hide his power and Im also pretty sure she only died so mc can get the quest what more annoying is that he saves the yandere same way he could save her and what happened to the emergency button things the school provided couldn't they use those?
That doesnt make sense. What school would have an emergency response that would cause the students to fail? Also, if your valuables were stolen, you should not call for the police because its too late anyway?
Drip:They don't want to use them in case it's a test where if they press it they fail. Plus, even if they pressed it, the retrieval team would have never made it in time.
I think the author was looking for a way to make a tragic story be a foundation for motivation like how spiderman was after uncle ben died but the author took a very illogical and wrong turn. Based on real life when an innocent girl is involved anyone would try to save them regardless of the situation. I guess its because we have this chivalry engraved unconsciously inside us like a knight in shining armor. I mean if I was the MC I would definitely save her and deal with the situation later. The author just made the MC a ba**less pu**y how disappointing.
BlueCold:That doesnt make sense. What school would have an emergency response that would cause the students to fail? Also, if your valuables were stolen, you should not call for the police because its too late anyway?
BlueCold:That doesnt make sense. What school would have an emergency response that would cause the students to fail? Also, if your valuables were stolen, you should not call for the police because its too late anyway?