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kiddeath1998
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This light novel my opinion is very bad. The beginning starts off horribly. How did it get to the top 10, I have no idea? The main character is unlikeable, Side characters are unlikeable the world itself is thought up to be a horrible mess. The novel needs a serious rewrite. The premise itself isn't even that original this light novel is slightly above-average. The times I can think of a story that starts off with will people beat me up and now I am starting to become a demon king. A LOT. What even makes it worse, is that it's not that different. Sure the best thing that you can say about this is that the reading quality isn't that bad, That's it!

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EternalChampion
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''The times I can think of a story that starts off with will people beat me up and now I am starting to become a demon king. A LOT. What even makes it worse, is that it's not that different.'' A story having a theme that is not unique dosn't mean it is bad. Every unique story will end up having a lot of similar ones in the future. Many novels have the same start or even the same general theme. I mean just look at this site. Everything is pretty much about cultivation, romance and system.

kiddeath1998
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I understand what you're trying to say it's just that when you combine a story that is extremely similar to a bunch of other ones and have almost nothing special about it, with a depressing horrible World mixed with an MC that is just not likeable most times, with a even more cliche and not thought out side characters, I just can't continue to read it.

EternalChampion:''The times I can think of a story that starts off with will people beat me up and now I am starting to become a demon king. A LOT. What even makes it worse, is that it's not that different.'' A story having a theme that is not unique dosn't mean it is bad. Every unique story will end up having a lot of similar ones in the future. Many novels have the same start or even the same general theme. I mean just look at this site. Everything is pretty much about cultivation, romance and system.