Review Detail of Cookie_the_lost in The Great Demon System
Review detail
Its revenge **** built on the vampire system thats so close that the only time it sidetracks is to have an anti hero that tortures people. I recommend the writer seek therapy because THIS IS VAMPIRE SYSTEM REVENGE PORN, SAME CONCEPT JUST WITH A ANTIHERO
The Great Demon System
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As i read it it just progressed from revenge **** to senseless violence to the point where it go sickening. The story sticks so close to Vampire system and even throws shade at it in a little underhanded comment. Saying that vampires could only ever be lowly compared to a demon. very interesting considering how close it Is and the lack of originality. btw saying you need therapy does not mean your insane, I just think your projecting with this writting and suggest that instead of stealing somebodies hard work you would benefit from talking to somebody instead.
By suggesting a therapy, you have crossed your limits as a reader and your review has lost a lot of credibility. Instead of a sincere review he became just a hater hating
Cookie_the_lost: As i read it it just progressed from revenge **** to senseless violence to the point where it go sickening. The story sticks so close to Vampire system and even throws shade at it in a little underhanded comment. Saying that vampires could only ever be lowly compared to a demon. very interesting considering how close it Is and the lack of originality. btw saying you need therapy does not mean your insane, I just think your projecting with this writting and suggest that instead of stealing somebodies hard work you would benefit from talking to somebody instead.
I have nothing but respect for you Joshua, this novels plot is dog water compared to MVS. The plot: The future demon Lords retardard harem that get kicks out of killing people. And then you have MVS mc a person who wants to change the world and protect what's most important to him.
Cookie_the_lost: As i read it it just progressed from revenge **** to senseless violence to the point where it go sickening. The story sticks so close to Vampire system and even throws shade at it in a little underhanded comment. Saying that vampires could only ever be lowly compared to a demon. very interesting considering how close it Is and the lack of originality. btw saying you need therapy does not mean your insane, I just think your projecting with this writting and suggest that instead of stealing somebodies hard work you would benefit from talking to somebody instead.
H_Bondini:Good review plus the author adds 200 to 400 words at the end of each chapter story with musings and symbols so that he gets paid more per chapter as each 200 words costs an additional coin for the reader.
