Review Detail of SlimyFish in Overlord: The Origin

This fic is poorly structured and poorly executed. 44 chapters, so far, 44,and yet we seem no closer to the transport than 40 chapters ago. Dozens of chapters of USELESS information chapter upon chapter of exposition that will not matter, there is so much irrelevant information it boggles my mind, every other OL ff has MAX 5 chapters of pre transport, establish NPC, world ranking, class, race and other small tidbits. Let's give an example, the 'scary door' its introduced we see the other guildmates reactions aaaaaand thats it. I can see no, no conceivable time (outside of wasting more time outside of the isekai) this would ever be needed, there are NPCs built for psychological torture and Ainzs breaks minds just by being there. And if, even if such a tool were ever needed why not introduce when, or slightly before, being needed. Yes, plot convenience is bad and a folly of writing but only if relied upon. Plot contrivence on the other hand serves no purpose unless you plan yo build a Tolkien-esque world and considering this is a pre-built world that excuse falls through. You can apply this logic to the constabt talk of PKing, the '''''banter'''''' of the guildmates and the constant mentioning of farming and etc. I hate to criticise free, amateur media but this OL fic has been updating for months now and is behind another released just a few weeks ago and yet the latter managed tp get all necessary information across in one chapter and drip feefs it through the others. I am aware that the wruter has full creative sovreignty and i am aware that WN is weird when it comes to word counts and recconendations nor do i want to come across as a smarmy know it all but 44 CHAPTERS???!!?!