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Review Detail of Vanbun in Evil Husband, Glutton Wife: Buy Miss Piggy, Get Free Little Buns

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the story start out very interesting and exciting, the twin are so cute and lovable! moyu and feng tianyi has a mutual understanding and love for each that help them through anything obstacle. I like how close the friendship is between meili and moyu is like how one family should protect each other. The realistic struggle that that these character went through can bring you to tears as well! kudos to the author there! The story development was good but it was lacking some creativity and elaboration- it's the same problem/ people they are dealing with the whole time in different setting and it took the whole novel to find out the real killer. the whole time it portray moyu and tianyi as a power couple with many resources and connect but it take them forever to figure it out. furthermore, as the story goes on it seem like it was rush to fast-forward through the year and all the elaboration of how the side character(as in the main character group of friend/other couple) character development got push towards the end like side chapter and noting what timeline this should have been. It would have been better to add those chapters along as the story develop and evolved on it own. even the ending for these side chapter has no ending leaving you at a cliffhanger. some part was still left unclear or didn't make sense if moyu's father also got blackmail about the video then why did he take a chance and see what its about? how all a sudden these girls grow a backbone and became impressive after knowing moyu and her friend even when there is barely any interaction between them like elaine wu and lan xiyan since when did yuanyi like yanran? and why? did she ever find out all the things he did for her after her divorce? what happen to their friend jiang from the beginning of the story? he was a friend of moyu and meili Overall, the story is good, the author did a good job with the storyline and writing style. i think it could be better at some part but i'm glad that its a complete and have a happy ending =)

Evil Husband, Glutton Wife: Buy Miss Piggy, Get Free Little Buns

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