Review Detail of Evergreen_Autumn in Alice, Angel Of Mercy

Item: Alice, Angel Of Mercy
Rating: 4.8

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Evergreen_AutumnLv23yrEvergreen_Autumn

Just finished chapter 2, and I have to say that the storytelling is really good. I did feel some issues with immersing myself into the story as there is a lack of punctuation, but it looks very promising!

Alice, Angel Of Mercy

Daoist1Angel2

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Valhalla123Lv3Valhalla123

good stuff

Daoist1Angel2:ah more than likely a woman.

3yr

Daoist1Angel2AuthorDaoist1Angel2

Ya, i am sorry about that. English was never my best subject. I generally try to reread the chapters but I found listening to them helps me to find more of the misspellings. I will try and do both in the future and hopefully the punctuation improves.

3yr

Valhalla123Lv3Valhalla123

yuri?

Daoist1Angel2:Ya, i am sorry about that. English was never my best subject. I generally try to reread the chapters but I found listening to them helps me to find more of the misspellings. I will try and do both in the future and hopefully the punctuation improves.

3yr

Daoist1Angel2AuthorDaoist1Angel2

no I'm not her or him if that is what you're asking

Valhalla123:yuri?

3yr

Valhalla123Lv3Valhalla123

that reply doesn't make sense?

Daoist1Angel2:no I'm not her or him if that is what you're asking

3yr

Valhalla123Lv3Valhalla123

I'm asking is there mc gonna end up with a man or a woman.

Daoist1Angel2:no I'm not her or him if that is what you're asking

3yr

Daoist1Angel2AuthorDaoist1Angel2

ah more than likely a woman.

3yr

Daoist1Angel2AuthorDaoist1Angel2

in all honesty I'm not that forward looking. i will probably intro 4 possible people and let the fans vote near the end of the book for what they want

3yr

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv5Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU

this is better

Daoist1Angel2:ah more than likely a woman.

3yr