Review Detail of Illusionniste in NONE123

So, I don’t usually read horror genre because I couldn’t connect well to the genre. Heck, there were scenes where I was just smiling, especially the frogs part. 🤦🏻‍♀️ I couldn’t get a grasp on the character arc of the protagonist, other besides he burned down his own house because of the blood. Maybe it was because the story was still new with six chapters out. But the protagonist intrigues me because he left me curious about him, especially on how his mind works. But in order to understand the story, the readers who tend to skim (which I made the horrible mistake to do it and ended up being confused about the story), they had to really read it in order to understand it. I don’t know why but when I was in the middle of the story, I suddenly thought of Shutter Island—the Scorsese movie. It had that certain 𝘫𝘦 𝘯𝘦 𝘴𝘢𝘪𝘴 𝘲𝘶𝘰𝘪 feeling to it. I do suggest spacing the paragraphs, especially when it comes to details. I love love love the details the writer gave, I’m a sucker for that. Details helps the story become real to the readers. The writer didn’t overload the chapter with too much details. (Heck, I tend to overdo my story details.) The writing quality was great, if there was any grammatical errors I didn’t see it because my mind was too busy on understanding the story. The chapters were short though, I know I mentioned it already in the other review but I had to say it here also. 😂 The world building was okay, it took me a while to imagine the settings but it was there. But I do suggest on trying to expand the world building. I love how the writer ends most of the chapter with a question. It was refreshing for me to see that in a story. It not might be my cup of tea but I did thoroughly enjoyed reading this.