Review Detail of Harem_fan in Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)

why that Ichigo gif. though?

Just the closest thing to long black hair and Profound energy that I can think of and if he uses the Darkness seed it will be Devil energy.

So he's YunChe? if so nah I prefer MC being an OC instead of a Body Jacker

All negative reviews have been deleted (?)

I don't delete any review whether it be good or bad. I would be grateful if someone pointed out my mistakes so I wouldn't repeat them in the coming chapters. My purpose to write here is to improve myself. So, rest assured.

If an OC is introduced in ATG, the plot goes on deviating from the storyline whatever I do. And this work being my first, didn't want to risk such. Just keep in mind, if you want a story where Yun Che doesn't go after girls then you may try this. And I am focussing much on interactions and character development. I promise it will be a bit interesting and gives peace to one's mind. That's what I planned to write.