Review Detail of Hashile in Supremacy Games

I've read up to chapter 584 here's my 2nd review ; At the start the world building is great, the grammar is not much but it's readable, the dialogues are nice and the relationships between the characters feels real. Sadly it quickly go downroad, first and foremost Felix fast become an arrogant and condescending character, while at the start he is someone sympathic (He was not a pushover just sympathic) he quickly become someone who avoid, ignore and mostly look down on others and while somes would say it's normal because he's stronger or 'greater' don't forget that it's the same guy who constantly whine to Asna or Jormungandr or whoever that the universe is unfair blabla. . So in short he's an hypocrite who suck up to those whom he consider 'greater' like the primogenitors, it can be a matter of course and considered 'normal' but to put it bluntly, it's just disgusting to read about a guy who advocate fairness while looking down on those who are less lucky and not less 'competent' while being kind and considerate in the purpose to be gifted opportunities. Next come the plot, to put it bluntly here too, there's none. It's just the primogenitors that argue with each others, it seem like a plot but it's bullsh1t, they have never hurt each others for real, I mean they can hurt each others physically and emotionnally, but let's be honnest who would have a feud over matters like that? I'm in no place to state on what basis can or can't people kill each others, but the primogenitors are described as eternal beings, even if they hated each others deeply at one point the eternity should've created something like 'love from hate', a sense of kinship in spite of everything. Here I am criticizing the lack of rationnality in the conflict. And don't talk about descendants, legacy and whatnot, in the first place they never cared about things like that, hell, Thor and Jorgumandr sent their descendant to kill each others for fun. The premise of the dispute between the 2 factions is literally "What? What did you say to my bro?" And if you really want to talk about the so-called "darken faction", in my opinion it's just ridiculous for the plot to be based on the big kids called "primogenitors" who literraly never had really grown up. From the start the conflict rested just on a point of view basis, no one was truly in the wrong, it's just guys angry with each others, and at this point it was fine we're no kids, nobody need a 'true evil' to be the antagonist as long as the story goes finely, but the author, as if to add weight to story and make the antagonists true 'evil people' make them petty. That's ridiculous. There was thousands ways to create true weight for the story and even add some mystery to the story but the author just started a fine concept and threw the towel. Futhermore I believe the author made Felix an idiot both an purpose and unconsciously : How many times does he ask or say things that goes directly against common sense of the novel? And I hate the dynamic of teacher who say "Discover by yourself" as if it was a good way to teach. The truth is that if every teachers said "Do it by yourself" we'd still be in the middle-age, what I'm criticizing here is that the author take too much after chinese novels, it's already somewhat seen but it's this point that really disgust me. People can't learn by themselves quickly and make explosive progress, it's impossible, people that studies and discover things by themselves take years to achieve something, the author know it, it's said several times by the 'primogenitors' "it took my millions of years to discover this by myself" so why does he make the MC do it by himself and doesn't just teach him? "I'll give you an hint" bro i'm not saying that hints are useless but is it what you base your teachings on? Lastly there'd come the grammar, truthfully from the start it was never too great but it become worse and worse as time goes, the author don't even pretend to care, there's of everything, each chapter you got to see something nice, 'saw' in place of 'seen' 'more stronger', this kind of thing and of course things like 'sylvia' who become 'slyvia' '11th generations bracelet' who become the '13th' or the '12th' with literally 2 chapters in between. Of course that's what they call typpo or lack of attention, but it's in every chapter, the author really don't pretend to care I said. The dialogues are a mix of curses and bland and tastless description. The narratives is really irrelevant the author don't even pretend to care I said, just click on a random chapters it's a mix of "damn, sh*t, bullsh*t" the author can't have a character speaking without saying 'sh*t', really. The descriptions are bland, the reasons behind actions are just bad, it's literally each time "because i want and what will you do" and when he care to explain a bit more it's nonsense each time. In my opinion it's good at the start so it got the reader hooked, next it's somewhat fast paced, there's not too much info dump and the action is fine so the reader continue to read even if it get frustrating and all but it's just bad, don't read it.