Review Detail of Ghost_Playing in Supremacy Games

Author, I will only list my pros and cons about this story: Pro: -Interesting Concept -Execution of "Concept/s" is very good -Immersive -Worldbuilding is very good -Mc is op -Mc is hardworking (when it comes to power) -"Pioneer" (in this case its about "Bloodlines") -... (I could list more but you should be able to make your own view of the story once you read it yourself) Cons: (only the most obvious) -The start is exaggerated, I mean the mcs body being unable to even go down stairs is just unrealistic. -Luck and especially BAD LUCK gets abused by the Author (I was okay with this in the beginning but it got on my nerves when the Author used it as an "excuse" why certain things will DEFINITELY go wrong) <—Its practically the Author telling us indirectly that something will go wrong, which will be very obvious later on in the latest chapters since he used it so often -Epect ALMOST every "plan" of the mc will go wrong. Don’t ask why. Its "bad luck" cliche greeting you after all (or rather the Author wanting to make things "exciting/interesting" or somthing but failing to do so since there is just no way that almost every plan of his goes wrong in one way or another, its just unrealistic) -MC character: Greedy, Egoist, Stupid, Lazy, Eccentric (these characteristics make it so that he is uncharismatic in a certain sense) <—His "hardworking" trait got added or rather forced on him due to plot reasons so I don’t count it -MC is always called stupid by a certain "voice" in his head which is hella annoying -MC will be having A LOT of annoying "voices" in his head that can read all of his memories and can kill him whenever they want and practically treat his "mind" as nothing even though it is the most personal space of each human. That is what makes this annoying and unrealistic. Unrealistic in the sense that the MC is even able to be okay with the fact that those "voices" can kill him, read his memories or even directly possess his body if the wanted which in a certain sense would make anyone feel like a "PUPPET" being at the mercy of strangers that reveal literally almost nothing about themselves while knowing EVERY little thing about you and what you might not even know yourself. <—I would just commit suicide if this happened to me, since who wants to be CONSTANTLY at the mercy of others? Nobody. Which makes it unrealistic. -MC is scared if death since he thinks he still has control of his own live which is straight up dump considering that he can die any moment due to the reasons stated above (a Normal Human would have actually become VERY DEPRESSED and would have suicidal thoughts knowing that their life isn’t truly theirs anymore to decide on whether they live or die WHICH MEANS that one becomes numb yo the thought of death) -MC needs to hide his strength CONSTANTLY which you can imagine just how annoying this is for most of the readers. (This is the most annoying thing about the whole story in fact, since the "hiding strength" act and "second persona" act is just overused sh’t. Not to mention, who the hell would wants to read the MC that will probably hide his strength until he can beat Origin realm bloodlines? Nobody.) Last words: I’m sure there are more PROS and CONS I haven't listed yet. BUT, BIG BUT, these are just my personal thought and how I areanged my PROs and CONs which means yours might be different entirely. Note: Just read the story yourself, theb you would know whether you like it or not.