i was really enjoying the start until i realised how slow this story was, so much useless information that you really dont need, so much filler aswell like that silver ranked maze game that was waaaay too long for what it should be, why are you extending the chapter so much with things that arent useful to the story? i just spend most my time reading a couple paragraphs and skipping the chapter since nothing really happens and those chapters sum what happen cause its so slow.
MidGard
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