Review Detail of _MR_FOOL_ in Supremacy Games
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absolutely love your work. i just hope the fights could be more detailed and his interactions with people could be more detailed. it would be great if you spent a few tens of chapters on world building to set a solid foundation. this is a good novel with a new idea i just feel there is a lot of wasted potential.
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a realistic harem would be poisonous. have you even heard china's royal history? how many concubines get poisoned to death? how many become cannon fodder? how many cheat on the king or betray him/try to kill him?. a happy harem is a fools folly.
Soawn:The construction of the world goes along with the plot. A ton of information is not poured on you, and it is forgotten. We learn about the world, together with the hero. I think this is the ideal approach.
i dont think the mystery style suits you. like reverend insanity, lotm, righteous player. these novels are just as you described. not a lot is known but it still keeps you in. but here the world building is lacking. the mc seems like the only useful dude the others are here to fill spaces. THEN comes the issue of SHALLOW WOMEN which ruined the book for me. i love a logical, rational, self centered, cold hearted, vicious, greedy, rational protagonist who doesn't focus on women but his objectives. i think you as an author should understand very few people above the age of 16 would like/prefer harem or shallow women. it would be much better to have either no romance/ single romance or a WELL STRUCTURED HAREM. so far i have not seen any books have a well structured harem. its because you cant.
Soawn:The construction of the world goes along with the plot. A ton of information is not poured on you, and it is forgotten. We learn about the world, together with the hero. I think this is the ideal approach.