Hello everyone! This is an updated review after the novel was out for 6 months by now! I saw a lot of authors writing the pros and cons of their works, So I decided that it is the perfect time to do one for my novel since there is already 300+ chapter available! Pros: >Extensive and fleshed out world background that would let you immerse yourself in the world much smoothly and find the logic in it although it is a piece of fiction! >MC isn't dense, stupid, virgin. He knows his priorities and doesn't chase skirts or risk his life over stupid shit. He is lazy and doesn't like having burdens. However, he is hardworking when it is concerning his strength. He is shameless, an asshole, and a bit of a troll. But, he is serious when he had to. He isn't a white knight neither he plans to be one. >English is not the best but it's not the worst either. I make sure to edit my chapters before releasing them and always check on previous mistakes. >Updates: 2 Chapters every day with a word count ranging from 1600 to 2000. >The First Volume was my 1st ever written volume so it wasn't really the best thing that I have written. But please bear with mistakes you see or the style of writing as from 2nd volume upward, the writing just keeps getting better and better. >Give it until the 2nd volume when he enters the UVR and sees if you like it then or not. **: There are 88 chapters for free to start! >No harem. .... Cons: >As I mentioned the first volume was a bit draggy than it should be and the writing wasn't the best in it. >Side Characters: I am trying my best to develop them one by one but I still prefer focusing more on the MC to keep the plot going at a faster pace. So, you can expect not much from them in those 300 chapters. (Drastic changes or something like that.) >No Harem, don't know if it is a con or pro, but I will just put it in both sections. >I have been told that my writing style is quite jarring by some readers, but I will leave you to decide that on your own. ... That should be it probably? If I missed anything, please write it in the comments, and please do know that I accept criticism with a thick face just make it logical and I will try my best to see what I can do about it. Thank you and I hope you join the journey with me and the rest of my lovely readers <3<3<3 (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
MidGard
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LIKEA lot of times it isn't though.. It ruins the story. But if it is executed properly, it will surely make the story better.
_Elysium_:As far as I'm concerned, no harem is a pro
I doubt you can enter with old books. ; You need to write a new book during the competition to be eligible.
Jaden_Wagner:Are you going to enter into the WSA 2021 i would love to see this book as a Animation
Don't play much anymore. Though, I am a mid main (velkoz/sylas/zed) plat II and peaked at diamond II.
Daedaluxs:Love the novel, one of the best written ones i've read, very minimal grammar errors. I can tell you love league, and I'd like to ask- what rank are you? Mains?
MidGard:Don't play much anymore. Though, I am a mid main (velkoz/sylas/zed) plat II and peaked at diamond II.
MidGard:Don't play much anymore. Though, I am a mid main (velkoz/sylas/zed) plat II and peaked at diamond II.
he was reborn in his own body but in a different timeline. So, it's in the reality and the UVR is a system that connects the entire universe.
Allpowerful:Okay i havent started this yet but got questions i see it says reincarnation in tags so does he die and get reincarnated in the universal VR game or does he stay alive and its just VR and real world stuff because i read some comments and it seems like the latter to me?
MidGard:he was reborn in his own body but in a different timeline. So, it's in the reality and the UVR is a system that connects the entire universe.