Alright review time 😣 Enjoyable story thus far ( only read 5 chapters so... 😅) anyways the story setting is nice as I'm already a fan of Indian culture and the likes Sitara is a relatable character and it was appreciated how you let the readers in on some of her daily activities but made sure not to bore us with the details . apart from a few grammatical errors and issues with tenses, everything else is OK so make sure to fix em up so as to improve the reading experience . anyways nice work author, keep up the good work 🤗
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