Review Detail of mzxzy in [Inside]

Nice start! Pretty fun to read. I can tell you have a knack for character building. I thought the 1D concert was real for a second. 😂 i was like, "so it's a fanfic?!" and then realized it was a dream sequence. Pretty good amount of drama and family issues that keep the story interesting. There are some minor issues with punctuation, dialogue and formatting but all in all I liked the first chapters. For a newbie author, you have potential. Keep up the good work! 🌟