Review Detail of The_Young_Flash in THE BETA WAVE (RAW)

Okay, thanks for the first negative comment..You said you can't understand anything without concentrating, what does that mean huh?? First, concentrate on the story then read🤭 Anyway the same title has won 3-4 awards and nobody said it's too bad, anyway I respect your opinion

I know what makes you say this.Maybe you are blinded by the common kind of Science Fiction stories, here in this book things are entirely different and some people like you fails to accept that, Bro, concentration is the key, concentrate and re read. By the way, every book has its own flaws and none is flawless, mind that.

And one more thing, you said it has no background, I think something is wrong with you😂🤭, What more background can you expect from a short story below 20K words, it needs to be quick and tricky, read the remain chapters and comment again

Sigh I was gonna let Bygones be Bygones. Wrong with me? This story is nonsense . A story has to flow and not confuse the readers. Nobody reads your story, I tried it out and gave constructive criticis for you to improve and you're taking shots at me. Want me to comment without filters too? Stop being an ass and plaguing me for your insecurities. Wanna see and even better story? I wrote two, go and check out my two novels. Better than whatever it is you're trying to write. Skills speaks for itself. Have some respect to your betters.

I didn't say you are a fool or Dumbass😂, now you talking about your story, I know how to respect other works, I just asked you to read the entire story (17 chapters) for understanding more so that you can give a better analysis of the story! what happened now?? We both are fighting head - head, if I made the mistake "I'm sorry'

I think you are from an English speaking country and of course you'll be better in terms of language😉..and I'm from a place where English is considered as nothing...Your book is definitely better than mine and I know it, please try to understand the spirit of the story, that's what I was talking about.Your story might be a novel but mine ain't...It's just a short story within 20K words, I pressed more for ideas rather that elaborating and decorating things, and that's the major difference, you've been reading that kinda stories and mine being a different one would definitely be hard to accept, I agree it has its own flaws

A good apology accepted. haha. I don't look down on your book and I noticed you're not from an English speaking country. I was just giving an honest review. I like the book and the theory behind it and all. I was just hoping you could rewrite it in a slow manner. What you have is perfect for a first draft. Good luck with your book. I feel like you have gold there though. Just need to flesh it out a bit more. XD. have a nice day/night.

Brother, who said nobody reads, it was featured in Wattpad paid stories as well, and when it came to webnovel I decided to cut down some parts and make it simpler,

Well, the software is constantly updating so the way your novel is promoted gets changed constantly. This website is mostly dominated by american/north and south america users. Hence, when you write a book and allow your location to be known, you are recommended to users in that geo-location. So depending on where you are, you might be better off than others. Also people like harem, and fanfics more than anything else on this website.

thanks brother 👍