Review Detail of Aciee_GelaTin in Black In the Water

Really surprised by the uniqueness of the overall concept and the storyline itself. I very much enjoy the interactions between the characters and how the author vividly described their physical attributes and personalities. I like how each is being given spotlight. Just be careful with the punctuation marks as they affect the fluidity of the story, but that's just a minor detail. It's really a great read! Good start as well. Keep it up, author!