I found the premise of this story to be really interesting and engaging. The author did a good job conveying the protagonist's troubles and I love those types of stories. My real gripe was the punctuations. Remember to add a space after a comma and also put periods or the appropriate punctuations at the end of dialogues but other than that ,it's a solid read. I definitely recommend putting this in your library.
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