Review Detail of White_Falcon21 in Alpha King

Let's get started for reviewing...? Writing Quality Good, the grammar is OK for me. But please divide the actual conversation and text to avoid a confusion. Stability of Updates: I won't criticize this. But at lease please consider upload 1 chapter every day. How can you do that? Simply, write four pages in MS Word for 2k until 3k words for each of the chapter, keep writing until at least you can cover 1 month full of upload then upload it one by one everyday automatically by system. Story Development I think you are describing about past events? The story flow is really fast and some of the stories skipped. Honestly, I had a hard time understanding your story and its flow. Character Design: Good. I found no faults when you are describing a character. Except, I hardly understand about their life background. World Background: Since it's still in the beginning, I won't make a review about it. But I love how you describe every races and how they find a mate in details. Sincerely Dead/Lost Novel and Manga Writer.