Review Detail of davexlee in Just let me be a cannon fodder

It's very informative, fast face slapping. Golden duo between the MC and fluffy haha. I can vividly imagine everything from your words. There were some errors punctuation mark but thankfully not disturbing the reading rhythm. Oh, that father and brother's of Yvonne? I hate them. Thank you. In a way a reader would hate 'villain' of course, not about how you write characters. Other than that I really enjoy your story. Can't wait to move to next chapters. I'm cheering on you, Author nim.