Review Detail of Sarah_McCartney in The Tale of the Abuse Omega

the flow of the story is amazing but after reading though i still had no idea how the character s look the world building lack extremely but it can always be improved on the story development dose seem cut and paste with other abuse Omaga stories the wright was done well though my advice to a fellow writer is at some point go back and see if you can edit and add the things that this story is lacking and don't be afraid to rework the typical werewolf troops where you trun them on their head to surprise your readers i love this story and do plan to keep reading i look forward to see how you grow and approve your writing