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Review Detail of Olpa in Level Up Legacy

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Olpa
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Almost done with volume 1 and I had a hard time to identify why it felt like such a slog to get through the chapters. Until I realized his powers are freaking boring. He gets this super mega secret and forboding powers and all it is turns into is STATS. A whole volume and all his powers have given him is some shitty boring abilities and some pure stats. The worst part is that he is getting stats from killing enemies but we later learn that SO DOES EVERYONE ELSE? So his power is currently,after 50ish chaps to double dip in the stats gained from killing monsters BUT his extra power isn't even enough to stand toe to toe with any decently skilled side-character. So he is useless. But the world is apparently resting on his shoulders. ??? 2nd point of criticism: The name of the story is Level Up Legacy but.... levels are pretty much meaningless. 10 levels and he has gotten 10 more points of mana.....which isn't a lot when he suddenly gets 4 mana from just killing some shits. You also removed new powers from coming from levels and put them into rewards from achievements. There are so much wrong with this sorry story. We got dumb plot armour, boring powers, wacky progress, tacky side-chars, miss-connection between what is show and what is told. Sometimes It feels like your write just to land on a leaderboard than actually writing because you got something awesome to write about.

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Level Up Legacy

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