Review Detail of Daoist814941 in Level Up Legacy

MellowGuy:Hi! First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing my novel. Secondly, I'm not so arrogant to think I'm the best writer under the heavens or something. I'm a newbie, to be honest. My novel being flawed is understandable. In regard to Arthur's character in the first volume, it was supposed to be flawed. You could see he's not the brightest of people, he's naive, and he's impulsive. It's a part of who he is at that time. He's not a reincarnator or an ancient character, but an eighteen-year-old dirt digger who's been granted such a power that he fails to realize its importance. It's really a part of the character design for him to grow out of this. As for your mention of plot armor, I think it's true that Arthur was lucky. He's not of great fate because I'm telling his story, but it's the opposite. I'm telling his story because he's of great fate. Many foreshadowing in the first arc could be picked up in very advanced chapters. You can see that clearly, as weird things begin to happen after a certain amount of time that even Arthur picks up. As for other perspectives, I really wish you'd read them. They tell what's happening from a different perspective. They tell why some things to Arthur. However, it's still your call to read whatever you like. I'm just glad you're reading at all. I really, can't stress this enough, thank you for this review. You've taken the time to properly analyze this story and I can't help but be grateful. I'll also pin this for others to see.

Dana_Brew:you know in a world of superpower... someone like mc was supposed to be more aware of how "scary" the world is rather than transmigrator/reincarnator

MellowGuy:Hi! First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing my novel. Secondly, I'm not so arrogant to think I'm the best writer under the heavens or something. I'm a newbie, to be honest. My novel being flawed is understandable. In regard to Arthur's character in the first volume, it was supposed to be flawed. You could see he's not the brightest of people, he's naive, and he's impulsive. It's a part of who he is at that time. He's not a reincarnator or an ancient character, but an eighteen-year-old dirt digger who's been granted such a power that he fails to realize its importance. It's really a part of the character design for him to grow out of this. As for your mention of plot armor, I think it's true that Arthur was lucky. He's not of great fate because I'm telling his story, but it's the opposite. I'm telling his story because he's of great fate. Many foreshadowing in the first arc could be picked up in very advanced chapters. You can see that clearly, as weird things begin to happen after a certain amount of time that even Arthur picks up. As for other perspectives, I really wish you'd read them. They tell what's happening from a different perspective. They tell why some things to Arthur. However, it's still your call to read whatever you like. I'm just glad you're reading at all. I really, can't stress this enough, thank you for this review. You've taken the time to properly analyze this story and I can't help but be grateful. I'll also pin this for others to see.

PoeticSonic:you would be surprised how easily people can be ignorant about the world they are in...

pheonixblue01:It’s not bad, you just have to be willing to sit through Arthur doing dumb things all of the time and then ending up in the orher world and starting from scratch for chapter 275. After 400+ chapters, the pace has slowed down to a couple of chapters a week and the story isn’t as interesting to me because it’s just the same racist/elitist/evil enemies, it doesn’t seem like he’s even trying to go back to Earth, and even if he does then the bad guys will likely be magically unbeatable again.

Dubois_Stewart:Ugh, i guess i'll go back to Supremacy Games, Shadow Slave, and Dimensional Descent till i catch up again. I really tried.

MellowGuy:Hi! First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing my novel. Secondly, I'm not so arrogant to think I'm the best writer under the heavens or something. I'm a newbie, to be honest. My novel being flawed is understandable. In regard to Arthur's character in the first volume, it was supposed to be flawed. You could see he's not the brightest of people, he's naive, and he's impulsive. It's a part of who he is at that time. He's not a reincarnator or an ancient character, but an eighteen-year-old dirt digger who's been granted such a power that he fails to realize its importance. It's really a part of the character design for him to grow out of this. As for your mention of plot armor, I think it's true that Arthur was lucky. He's not of great fate because I'm telling his story, but it's the opposite. I'm telling his story because he's of great fate. Many foreshadowing in the first arc could be picked up in very advanced chapters. You can see that clearly, as weird things begin to happen after a certain amount of time that even Arthur picks up. As for other perspectives, I really wish you'd read them. They tell what's happening from a different perspective. They tell why some things to Arthur. However, it's still your call to read whatever you like. I'm just glad you're reading at all. I really, can't stress this enough, thank you for this review. You've taken the time to properly analyze this story and I can't help but be grateful. I'll also pin this for others to see.