Deducting one star for the little bit of grammar mistakes (which is understandable as English is not the Authors first language. I wish I could only do a quarter star off). A great read and very enjoyable. Definately a new favorite. I would purchase in ebook form if I could.
MellowGuy
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LIKEIt's okay really, I understand that my novel is not perfect. I just hope it was fun to read until now. I just need the time or an actual editor to fix this, so please forgive any future mistakes you might pick up. It would be even better to leave a comment so I could edit them, shaping this story better for future readers.