Review Detail of SSKV_R3D in Center Realm: The Girl and Her Glowing Necklace

The story is intruiging and Interesting. Yes the characyer development is good same as the grammar, but the story is pretty predictable. I hope you can give some unexpected moments specially some twist that will change the faith of the characters drastically, so that they can feel more humane. But overall it was an amazing work! Good job writer...