Perfect grammar√ Show not tell√ Intriguing√ Every wording is emphasized with meaning and atmosphere, it's good for someone who likes to immerse themselves with the story. I'm not a professional writer myself so I can't point anything bad within this story but hey, It's something good for your time, a hidden gem hiding from a thousands and thousands of other similar gem with unique and it's own aesthetic. Kudos for the author for making such a wonderful story It's really recommend, I've only read a couple of chapter but I will finish it in the future
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