Review Detail of _Daulla in A Fallen Knight-Lost art of necromancy
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Hi, it's me here, your author. NOTE--- 1- I like details so I am gonna add a lot of it. 2-I know mc is dumb. 3-If you think this will be a typical necromancy story with a system then you are wrong. I don't like system novels and it will contain its necromantic elements but you need to be patient lol. 4- My grammar isn't da best but it isn't that bad that it's unreadable. 5- If you like, read it and if you don't drop it. 6- Genuine comments and review are accepted. 7- I don't mind if you point out my mistake but hate comments are not acceptable. 8- This is full of mysteries and fantasy elements so I need to make it full of details so you guys can catch ques of story lol. 9- Hope you all love Severus. Happy reading! Regards
A Fallen Knight-Lost art of necromancy
_Daulla
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Hi vivi š thanks for reading it, and now heading straight for your questions. Mc Is dumb cos he is šš...I wanted to make him humorous so kinda made him dumb in some situations. before reincarnation, he was quiet and secluded person, tbh ...no one actually knew how he was in reality which was a stark contrast. As for his personality ...he was brought up in a harsh environment. .bit did had few good buddies ...though they cheated him but that's something that happened in future ....so all in all...in front of others he was quiet but in reality he was a kid from heart ...who just appeared to be matured. He has traumas and scars from childhood so he is bit vulnerable to situations and people....it is only because of noworry ...he feels happy and free ....and himself, so he behaveslike that with him. As for being immature, he isn't immature or dumb ...its just that he knows raven aka noworry is too proud, shrew and conceited, but for Severus ...somehow he had a soft part....he knows that noworry can't be won unless he behaves the way he does with noworry. ...and yes he does act like child with him cos he didn't got a chance to ever behave like that in his previous life. I hope I answered everythingš happy reading journey š
The_Snow_Empress:Hey there auther, I just have a few questions while reading..... I have not read many chapters so beare with meš 1) Why is the mc dumb? well it is true that we don't know how he was before he reincarnated but he was a knight. And a famous one at that. 2) I am confused about his personality. Sometimes he is playful when it's serious top and serious when it's not such a big deal. 3) Back to the dumb part, while reading I get the feeling that he is more immature then dumb. Like sometimes when he is talking to the Raven, he acts like a child. would love if you answer my questions. other then this, I love reading it and will probably continue itš.
SourApple67:can you add him a turtle with defense on the max,and is very comical.
SourApple67:can you add him a turtle with defense on the max,and is very comical.
It seems like such a waste to write into the story so many women who want to be with the MC but he is only after one. Itās like those irritating anime shows where he could have them all but heās like ānah bro, why have all these wonderful and beautiful women when I can be an idiot, lol, and just pick oneā....why not just write in his one love interest/wife and use all those extra words from not writing in those other women to develop the MC and his wifes relationship and let them spend more time together? It would be different if you were planning on going the polygamy/harem route, but youāre not so including love interests that are only going to fail just because seems like digging a hole in your backyard for no reason at all when you could have been at work making moneh or something. Not to mention youāre writing a slower paced story so it would work perfectly, so you would have a deep well established romance between them. Itās your story and you can write it any way you want, it just seems like a waste to introduce so many women who fall for the MC that are doomed to fail before it even starts.