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Diablo0_0
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AridasWolfLv10AridasWolf
One in the synopsis, get rid of 'gonna,' it does not fit at all! But I will give your story a read. Also, read your work aloud if it makes sense that it is good. I have written over 100+ chapters on my one book, and I know the struggle. All I can say is keep on going, and you will improve to the point you say, "why did I write that?" or "whats was I trying to say?" Trust me; you will kick your own butt late for how bad you once were.
Diablo0_0AuthorDiablo0_0
AridasWolf:One in the synopsis, get rid of 'gonna,' it does not fit at all! But I will give your story a read. Also, read your work aloud if it makes sense that it is good. I have written over 100+ chapters on my one book, and I know the struggle. All I can say is keep on going, and you will improve to the point you say, "why did I write that?" or "whats was I trying to say?" Trust me; you will kick your own butt late for how bad you once were.