Review Detail of GloriouslyFamous in Last Avatar

Well done, I love the concept of the story and your descriptions of the scenes. The plot of the story is very exciting and I will be looking forward to more. The MC seems very interesting and I can't wait to find out what you do with him. I like your writing style. It was a great read. Well done and keep it up! The spaces after commas, quotations and full stops were missing, I understand that it is probably due to some clash in the system. Other than this little bit of a problem, everything else seems very good.