The plot setting and character development are good. A story about a woman taking the initiative to be something on her own is interesting. But do prioritize the editing over the releases to enhance the content quality. Minor grammatical errors do seem like nothing much but can be annoying in stories especially relating to 'character development'. One would love to bookmark it after a couple of tune-ups. Overall, the pacing and writing are good. Keep it up.đđ
Herlove
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LIKEHerlove:Thank you! As for the grammar, I'm still go in to revise the book and edit. For now I'm just trying to write as much chapters as possible. Please, bear with me....