Review Detail of Drapetomaniac12 in The Shadow of The Past

Good story! Who doesn't like a strong, independent and brave female lead? Readers, if you're bored of reading books in which the female is weak and falls for the guy in a blink of eye, this book is definitely for you! You won't get bored. Your writing style is good. But I'd suggest you to edit the book once. There are a few grammatical errors as well as typos. Moreover, you haven't indicated which dialogue belongs to whom so that's confusing. 5/5 from me on story development and character design. The story is progressing nicely. Neither too far nor too slow. You've given a vivid description of Fl's working life so that was a plus for me. Overall good job! Keep writing!