Review Detail of heavenlyundead in Beginning Of Fire
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Gonna be honest i tried to read more but the background is soooo messsed up that if i could i need to go on a killing spree in gta to cool down. also if the author can fix these time paradoxes it would be lovely and i would def restart reading. (also before anyone talk about the time reversal technique both the ANs and miraak's monologue reveals these flaws as facts so these are oversights not intentional.) just a list for people who are wondering on why the background is so wrong: 1. Atmorans are not nords in fact nords came after atmorans mingled with the nede (the human tribes of tamrial). 2. Dragon cult is still in its infancy and is a subgroup of the worship of animal spirits. 3. the 500 happened after the night of tears not before. 4. magic is venerated not hated, Nordic hatred for magic happens in the 3rd era not the 1st era. 5. the interactions with the snow elves seems unnaturally hostile as at current situation despite the night of tears not happened by the time i read. 6. they do know the race of elves exited before as they use to share land in atmora with them, so the talk about race wierded me out as if they never heard of any other race before. 7. Miraak himself is probably hasn't been borned yet because he comes in lore recognition like 100 years from now and on the island of solsteim, and yes he is a nord so meaning he physically cannot have lived during the first landing in the tamrial. i know i am being a buzzkill and the premise sounds awesome but unless the convoluted timeline for me is like reading a history book and suddenly seeing the nazi's and hitler during the middle ages, alexander the great/cursed during the renaissance era and Donald trump as the emperor of china during the 3 dynasties era. why is bethesda stories cursed on this site, first super mutant that can reproduce and now this.
Beginning Of Fire
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yes, first things first and this one easy is to remove any line about atmorans hating magic, secondly and this one is crucial for miraak existing before miraak is possible to exist is to make it that he reincarnated not to his younger self but to his past incarnation as this would make it somewhat more believable (also make him NOT a NORD, nords are not yet a thing.)(this is for the beginning part of the story). 3rdly is for his dragon cultist statues is to make his display of magic open and known because the dragon cultist are all almost exclusively are arch-mages and make his mastery over weaponry his trump card as he is still a kid, also because as a kid he cant technically be an archmage (would be pretty awkward for a room full of 30 to 1000+ years to have a kid in their midst.) make his statues as the first dragonkin (dragonborn) known so it makes sense that he is a cultist, this also makes his interaction with dragons less of him being a worm to him being their brother in mortal body (would make it easy for them to make fun of him for his mortal shell but they would still take care of him). also make him relive his new life since infantcy so he would fit in more and his background to be more integrated and have the ripple effect chance. i would suggest more stuff but i think these are the more crucial details currently oh btw here is some links i found that may help on the lore on further intraction of other characters: https://elderscrolls.fandom.com/wiki/Atmoran https://elderscrolls.fandom.com/wiki/Miraak
or a better idea cus i restarted reading again and when i learnt the new chapters i think its just easier to say **** it this an AU cus of his rebirth into a previous incarnation cus its honestly easier for you as a writer, for me as a lore freak, (the lore during that time has **** ton of plot holes and no crystal clear timeline anyway) and you can make it your own special timeline. still need to remove the nords magic hating lines in the first 2 chapters. hopefully this helps with our collective sanity.
heavenlyundead:yes, first things first and this one easy is to remove any line about atmorans hating magic, secondly and this one is crucial for miraak existing before miraak is possible to exist is to make it that he reincarnated not to his younger self but to his past incarnation as this would make it somewhat more believable (also make him NOT a NORD, nords are not yet a thing.)(this is for the beginning part of the story). 3rdly is for his dragon cultist statues is to make his display of magic open and known because the dragon cultist are all almost exclusively are arch-mages and make his mastery over weaponry his trump card as he is still a kid, also because as a kid he cant technically be an archmage (would be pretty awkward for a room full of 30 to 1000+ years to have a kid in their midst.) make his statues as the first dragonkin (dragonborn) known so it makes sense that he is a cultist, this also makes his interaction with dragons less of him being a worm to him being their brother in mortal body (would make it easy for them to make fun of him for his mortal shell but they would still take care of him). also make him relive his new life since infantcy so he would fit in more and his background to be more integrated and have the ripple effect chance. i would suggest more stuff but i think these are the more crucial details currently oh btw here is some links i found that may help on the lore on further intraction of other characters: https://elderscrolls.fandom.com/wiki/Atmoran https://elderscrolls.fandom.com/wiki/Miraak
Thank you. With my time being consumed by studying, I don't really have that time, so it's becoming more and more difficult to 'Research' the Elder Scrolls Timeline. Reading some sites and seeing some videos on youtube explaining some things, I saw that, indeed, the Atmorians didn't hate Magic. Thank you, I will rewrite some things here and there.
heavenlyundead:or a better idea cus i restarted reading again and when i learnt the new chapters i think its just easier to say **** it this an AU cus of his rebirth into a previous incarnation cus its honestly easier for you as a writer, for me as a lore freak, (the lore during that time has **** ton of plot holes and no crystal clear timeline anyway) and you can make it your own special timeline. still need to remove the nords magic hating lines in the first 2 chapters. hopefully this helps with our collective sanity.