Review Detail of Great_maid_Oni in Second Chance: Summon System

Let's see, first of all I come to say that it's not worth reading Now let's go to the rest of the analysis. . I'm in the chapter 127, Take this into account . WRITING: English is not my first language, I am Brazilian, I read through the translator to understand better and what I see is not bad, with nothing to complain about his writing. . UPDATE: The only good thing about this work is the daily posts but with the amount of words written, anyone could do it. . DEVELOPMENT: It started well and ruined everything in the process, the story boils down to a character full of himself doing bullshit around and everyone wagging their tail at him. I would like to say that the author got lost in the story but it doesn't seem to be that since he totally ignored all the tips that the readers gave until everyone gave up on him. . CHARACTER: It's just an idiot child doing what he does in his head, totally disregarding logic. . WORLD DEVELOPMENT: If I have already forgotten, it is being totally ignored for the benefit of the protagonist