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Review Detail of 8Eight in Second Chance: Summon System

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Novel is pretty good, and an enjoyable read. However there are still some flaws Lemme explain Writing is good, no problem here +1 Updates are stable very good +1 The story is a bit of a mixed bag not gonna lie, the author seem a bit confused about what he has done and how to go from here. Because he has effectively made a slice of life novel. But seem like he didn't really set out to do so. It doesn't really have much of grim reality for something with a mature tag. Don't get me wrong it's not bad, just not really what I you would expect. I will come back to this later. Characters are not too bad. The side characters are honestly those I like the most currently. The Mc comes across as passive. In a boring way, not always but usually. He has some moments where he is more scheming which I really like. But as stated above it doesn't really fit very well into a slice of life novel. The world overall world has minimal description. But the current world around him descriptions aren't too bad. Some thoughts suggestions. Depending on what you want to do you can continue the slice of life which is kinda cute Ideas. The ever expanding world. The continent they live on is in reality just a tiny island compared to the rest of the world The great schemer who, pulls the strings of the world with his army of cloak and daggers Say **** it and invite some good old Warhammer Vermintide or chaos into the world I quite like the novel, but it's very eeh idealistic let's call it that. Best of luck Mr author

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Second Chance: Summon System

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