Review Detail of Crook_Shank in Transmigrated To Naruto World as Sasuke Uchiha

Item: Transmigrated To Naruto World as Sasuke Uchiha
Rating: 5

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Crook_ShankAuthor3yrCrook_Shank

Hi all. It me the author here. This is my first fanfic. So readers, pls share your reviews and help me improve on my mistakes. Your reviews will be a motivation for me to upload more chapters as fast as I can and write other fanfics. Pls give me your support. Thank you in advance.

Transmigrated To Naruto World as Sasuke Uchiha

Crook_Shank

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DemonHunterColeLv1DemonHunterCole

Oh! He did this to you as well? He just did this with a Harry Potter story from FanFiction.net. TheBlack'sResurgence Is the true author’s name of his story. You should get in touch with him. Combine efforts to get this jerk banned.

2yr

Mud_ManLv4Mud_Man

You should put it in the fan fic section of U want more exposure

3yr

Mud_ManLv4Mud_Man

You should put it in the fan fic section of U want more exposure

3yr

Crook_ShankAuthorCrook_Shank

I tried it, but am not able to change it from Novel to Fanfic.

Mud_Man:You should put it in the fan fic section of U want more exposure

3yr

AngelsCreedLv11AngelsCreed

The only thing that irked me a little in the beginning was the poor use of dialogue. basically there were too many times where You could have used dialogue but chose not to. For example, there were quite a few times where you would say “i told him about...” instead of making the character actually describe what happened in a dialogue. so that’s my only advice to you going forward. i can tell that it’s gotten much better in the later chapters however its definitely still something to be conscious about. Other than that, it was really impressive and entertaining especially as a first time fanfiction author so congrats on that and i look forward to future chapters.

3yr