tldr, great story, definitely worth the read, pace felt a bit rushed. wonderful story. 9/10. loved the implementation of toriko abilities/characters. great harem with character development. only criticism is that the pace was very fast for the whole fic and it would have been nice to see some more slice of life/slower, more detailed development chapters instead of so many timeskips. Also would have been nice to see more relationship development as most of it is mentioned in retrospect rather than dates or missions where characters overcome hardships and grow closer, etc.
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Liked it!
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