Review Detail of Sinful_Bear in Lightning Is the Only Way

This is a personal review from someone that doesn't have any exprience in writing but read hundreds of books i read two of your novels, and this one is much more focus in "Will" against the heaven. But i hardly feel any strong emotion that needed to forge his will knowing that his final enemy is the heaven itself. Please let me grit my teeth, let me feel the rage, let me cry in his desperation.Give him and us a reason why we should continue the journey. "Will is forged by desperation not by inspiration"