Review Detail of DawnAquarius in I Am Really Not The Son of Providence

The story outline and plot were quite good, definitely kept me reading and more importantly spent money. But there were several times I just skipped paragraphs to get back to the story. The verbiage was too repetitive and awfully predictable. Also the ending was more of a cliffhanger and basically suggesting that a dad doesn’t need to be a father to his daughter if he gives her a few gifts.