Review Detail of Bored_Monster in Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm
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A 3.6, maybe a shaky 3.8 from me. A farming system. Does that mean he farms mystical crops, does smart trading and uses them to upgrade his status, fame and power? Nope, it's so that he gains an easy, no thinking ability that does everything and more. The System: A farming system that literally grows everything as long as 'fertilizer' is added. Including exploding peas, eye sight enhancing carrots (carrots don't actually improve eye sight) and soul enhancing cucumbers and the bust increasing corn(as of chapter 59). The characters: There was so much potential here. But with the transmigrated somewhat clichèdly perverted MC, the slapstick mindreader that was so very disappointingly introduced and the woman who drank so much 'corn juice' that her bust size increased to H cup. The story: Again, this was a missed opportunity. The people in power have known about the revitalization of Qi and have been preparing for it. A transmigrated MC with an op farm system, a government organisation that seeks to maintain order in the country and it's destructive counterpart that seeks to destroy it. This, if done right, could've been a good action novel but it relies so heavily on sexual innuendos (thick juicy corn, a blushing easily distracted mindreader that keeps screaming pervert and such) that it just ruins that flow.
Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm
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Hey David did you know your novel is trash and i could care less about it. Please go get run over by a truck and reincarnated into another world, hopefully you'll become a better author next time 😉.
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I'm willing to take a try. Also, I agree with original review, including the fact that when the MC got the system he was whining and complaining for no reason.
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