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Review Detail of Payton_Gothard in Start With Contracting Sprites

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Payton_Gothard
Payton_GothardLv23yrPayton_Gothard

Hmm this book does hace potential though if i could recomend a few points... 1 do more thorough editing of english. i.e m. gramhar, structure etc.

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Le_Bob
Le_BobLv5Le_Bob

yknow for a review asking for more thorough editing, your review sure could use some proofreading and a bit of editing. that said, i do agree to some more editing

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Fantasy_Dream
Fantasy_DreamLv3Fantasy_Dream

Burrnnnn

Le_Bob:yknow for a review asking for more thorough editing, your review sure could use some proofreading and a bit of editing. that said, i do agree to some more editing
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