Review Detail of _Daulla in The Villainess and her Victim

Lance why did you not tell me earlier. You write soo well. Omg,, your writing skills are so refined. I love Asura and Lancera. Such beauties. Writing quality--- Flawless, can't even find a mistake. Stability of updates- Regular Story development- I like how you started it, with all the chunnism and self narcissism of Asura. Her character develops as we read ahead. I fell like you written everything in 1 pow, its good though but sometimes i felt like Asura is always talking to herself. I know its part of the character but i feel the story will get more interesting when you will add more interaction of characters instead of self interaction...But beside that the story is awesome. Character design---lol Asura even swear on her beauty and intelligence. Well, I like the Asura character and Lancera villainous. I want to know more about Lanceraaaa World background- Uhh its the only part which I didn't understand. Maybe the world is the medieval era. Waitingggggg for more. Everyone, just give a read to this story and I promise you will be hooked. ~~The author is chunni lord, so i am hoping to see more interesting character~~ well done author.