Pretty good so far. To be honest I would give this a perfect score if I were comparing it only to other Webnovels however I think it has the potential to stand as an actual book, and it that regard there are definite criticisms. That being said, this is only the beginning and the author is definitely improving so who knows what the future holds.
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