Review Detail of Ellorando in Game of Thrones: The Prideful One.

I read a lot of good novels. The trait they share commonly is that they build up characters, realistic actions of whom lead to the story development. You can often hear phrases like "my characters write this story" or something like this. This is not such story. This is the story where author bends the world itself and the MC to achieve results he desires. And it's really easy to bend this MC because he doesn't have any personality nor any set expertise. If there is something author wants to achieve I'm confident that suddenly our MC will "remember" exactly needed knowledge of it. We begin with not random random where MC gets cherry picked abilities because: 1) Author seems to realize absurdity of trope "you are reincarnated and I will give you 3 any reality breaking abilities to choose" but can't write novel without it. 2) Seems like author wants to give appearance that the story is not a wish fulfillment story, which turns out not very well. Then we continue with development of the house, which happens abruptly through time skips where again author fits the world and the MC together to achieve desired result, didn't even consider real hardships of creating prosperous territory in medieval time. Also we see that MC utilizes his reality breaking ability to control all the animals which considering medieval like population of animals is ability capable of destroying all the civilization and beyond. I just can't see this novel as capable of becoming interesting story. If the next chapter would be the last where MC suddenly marries the harem and he is the king of the world there is nothing that would be lost. I hope the author will improve his writing by responding to criticism maturely and by reading other interesting novels. Novels preferably not on this website, because this is common shortcoming here. Wish you the best!