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Ouranos_Gein
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The story is really bad, I feel like there are way too many plot holes from the fact of how Nora managed to turn him into a vampire, how she solved the sunlight problem, the escaped cultists, the knowledge of diverse technology that would be incredibly tough to make even for university grads, (he is a high school graduate only goddamnit, how can he know how to produce electricity, harness it, make electrical hardware enough to build TV's and computers, programming for the computers of course and servers like wtf? He probably needs 5 different degrees for that ****) the fact that he is making TV, computers when there is nothing to watch, nor anything to use the gadgets for, the vague and lack of explanation for his abilities, the lack of acknowledgement by your MC that he is now a 30 year old man,not to mention the need for editing your chapters,..etc Tried my best but this the drop zone, this is not a story with plot holes, these are plot holes with story in them

I am the first Vampire

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