Review Detail of Kakatua in Time Emperor (Champion)

I like the story but I'm sorry to say and it's not to criticize but it doesn't deserve the 4.9 rating it has... And with this I don't mean it's bad but there are much better fanfics with more detail and better quality and although this fanfic is good It doesn't deserve the almost 5 stars it has, it deserves a 4.5 at best. I'm writing this review because if you've just read a good fanfic with a much lower rating than this one, don't expect to find a work of art.