Review Detail of Yue_021 in Time Emperor (Champion)

For those who cant read spanish, I recommend using google web translate. Trust me, this fanfic is worth the effort. Even if its google translated, its is still very much readable comapred to mtl. So far, the only obvious grammar mistake is that 'he' or 'she' isnt used properly however aside from that it is still easy to read and sometimes better than some other fanfic written in english. If this was written in english, I have no doubt that this will soar in the rankings. So give this a try you will defintely not regret it.