Review Detail of Oemar_danoes in The Eternal battle

This book is a hidden masterpiece! Although it's not satisfactory for short-readers that don't really. I like sophisticated much but for me, I do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to reduce your point. The characters might need some development since it's lackadaisical but I can handle it. I gave it 5 stars since I do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4-star rating! Anyways go on writing and upgrading. Your grammar, tenses, and vocabulary need to be something that everyone understands, That's for your book to be more engaging!