Review Detail of Kristine_Liwag in I am a knight of the Duke - The story of Derek Wintern (Yaoi / BL)
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I'm amazed by the way the MC and ML feelings develop smoothly and naturally but I think their relationship is too fast paced. The *** scenes came too fast. It makes me think how easily conquered Hansel is like an easily captured otome game character. I'm not hoping for slow burn romance but make the relationship a little slower. Sorry if my words sound harsh author-nim. This is just an idea. I really like the way your writing style makes my reading experience enjoyable and you book have a good potential if improved.
I am a knight of the Duke - The story of Derek Wintern (Yaoi / BL)
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Thank you for making time to write this review. I am grateful ❤️❤️❤️. In the back of my mind, I always knew that the story is progressing a little fast for the readers and adult scenes are what make up the most of the chapters but that was the plan from the start. I was trying my hand in writing an erotica and testing the waters at the same time, as this platform was new to me. so 18+ scenes are abundant. but please bear with me because there are a lot of aspects left to cover and Hansel isn't conquered just yet. thank you for your love and support. 🌼🌼🌼